Wednesday 25 July 2018

Quick Write

This year we're doing something called quick write. It is when the teacher gives you a sentence starter and you add on to it.  ( the story starter is underlined in my story.)
For example this is mine:

My cape flapped behind me when... I ran towards the guinea pig run. 
Those poor guinea pigs a whole day without food, I had to come to the rescue! 
Carrots, broccoli apple and 
cucumber fell out of my hands as I opened the hutch. Nibbles and
 Roxy greeted me with a 
hungry look.  "Never fair, Sophie's here," I said with a voice that 
made my guinea pigs sprint back
 into their little house. They came back out as I dropped the food
 onto the grass in their hutch. 
As they nibbled on a carrot, superhero Sophie 
went back inside. 


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