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Thursday 23 May 2019
Escape from Kraznir
From the end of term 1 to week four of term 2, in the writing workshop we have been working on a chapter book named escape from Kraznir. I am up to chapter 5 so far and I am really enjoying it. Here is a link to my writing:
Good work BB....I'm actually even more impressed with myself that I have finally figured out how to comment :-) you've had it now I'll be writing all sorts on nonsense...say hi to The Bonster
Hi Sophie, well done. I am also doing this in my writing group. I really liked your writing because it left me wanting more. Next time remember to check for capital letters. From Bonnie
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Good work BB....I'm actually even more impressed with myself that I have finally figured out how to comment :-) you've had it now I'll be writing all sorts on nonsense...say hi to The Bonster
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie, well done. I am also doing this in my writing group. I really liked your writing because it left me wanting more. Next time remember to check for capital letters.
ReplyDeleteFrom Bonnie