I found it challenging to know what to share or to keep personal.
I found it very easy to create the image of me as I have done it many times before.
Next time I'll try add more sentence styles to my writing to learn something new.
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Hi Sophie, Kya here,
ReplyDeleteYour polyline avatar was really good, I especially liked your jacket! You definetally do a lot of gym! Nice job overall.
Kia ora. My name is Poppy and I attend mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I like how you did you avatar.I like how you did your jackete. It was really cool overall I thought it was a really good but maybe you could do a photo next to your avatar.we did the same thing in our class.
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Deletethank you so much for your descreptive feedback, its great knowing you did the same thing in your class.
Kia ora Sopie My name is Riana and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne And I really like You avatar Mostly the hair tho but just to let you know Gisint Is one word not two.
ReplyDeleteHi Riana,
DeleteThank you so much for commenting on my blog and thank you for the feedback.
Hi Sophie, it's Caitlyn here,
ReplyDeleteI like your drawing it's really good. I really like the designs on your jacket. Next time just remember that Gisint is one word not two. But overall it's really good.
Good job,
Caitlyn
Hi Caitlyn, thank you for your feedback it was really detailed.
Deletehi sophie i really like your polylineing
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Holly and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I liked how you told people what your favourite sport is and how much you do it. What was your puppy's name?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Alec from Makauri,I like the way you done your face. I have a dog to, his name is Milo. I do not no what you could do to make it better.
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